I'm not too good at this but I disagree with the previous criticism that the person is not a strong enough element. He or she is a part of the environment not the focal point. Being on the right side of the picture draws the eye in a circle and to me the person stands out just fine. Its the only living element inthe photo so it automatically draws the eye.
I also LOVE LOVE LOVE The foreground here with the dark manhole cover. The perspective is freaky and that lends even more to the devistated post war look. The red light seems signifgant also. Like its screaming "stop before we become just like this!"
Overall I really like this picture. Too bad you're not a teen photo artist. I'd invite you to join my group.
I love the concept and composition, but the brightness of the white mist seems a tad overdone. The person is hard to see, almost escaping notice- shouldn't he/she be more of a focal point? I appreciate the symbolism of having the red light (STOP) be the only brightly colored thing in the picture, but somehow I find myself wishing for a few more tints here and there so that the picture would look more realistic. However, you have captured the urban wasteland feel of the place with your usual genius, and I love the sharpness and clarity of your details.
I also LOVE LOVE LOVE The foreground here with the dark manhole cover. The perspective is freaky and that lends even more to the devistated post war look. The red light seems signifgant also. Like its screaming "stop before we become just like this!"
Overall I really like this picture. Too bad you're not a teen photo artist. I'd invite you to join my group.
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